April 25, 1990 Apr25 by jbwarner86 on April 25, 2020 at 12:00 am Chapter: 4/23/90 - 4/29/90: Rage Against the Magazine └ Tags: Aaron, Joel
Maybe not the best idea to document your own experiences in the first draft, Joel. Save that pain for a song later. And don’t open with a joke.
Wait… Does that mean the I don’t like Sand scene is Ascended Fandom???
Joel maybe try not to depress your audience
It doesn’t get to the point, but it’s got a lot of “plea for mercy”.
You know your story isn’t very good when Aaron has something to critique about it.
And I actually wouldn’t say Joel’s story is bad, but I would suggest a LOT of revision to make it more concise and flow better.
Damn, that pretty depressing. The feels right there.